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When was the last time you watched the news or opened a paper without there being a story about one government department or other having their information compromised in one way or another?
November 1, 2008 at 04:17 am by stvalentine, 39 views, 1 comment
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at 06:19 on November 1st, 2008
stvalentine, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
Please review What Makes News News. It can really help if you follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)